The Revolution has begun,
the streets begin to flood,
your not the only one.
As the rain begins to fall
you look through the crowded streets
thats all i have im working on more but i want an opinion on this first
be honest.
I love this so far! This could lead into so many depthy meanings as far as I'm conlyrics opinioncerned, and it's your job to mold it into what you want the listener to get from it; Again, fabulous work, I can so hear this being produced!
~Hannah
Hey, e-mail me or contact me in some way when you finish these lyrics! I would love to see the outcome! Thanks for picking me anyway!
lyrics opinion
its good, but you have to maybe give a description on what the song is about. Ya know? that way when yo throw the rest of the lyrics in it makes sense and it isnt just verbal vommit.
I do like them!
It's o.k. for a rock song.I like it so far.Keep working on it,it could become a great song.
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